A Daughters Rage

This isn't really a poem so to speak, but prose....



Can you look at yourself?
And when you do, if you can, are you disgusted?
Do you see what I see?
Denial, addiction and selfishness
Can you see yourself for what you are?
A liar, a con, A man that has made no progress
Can you see what you have done?
Can you feel? …..anything?


I hate you for the fool you've made out of me
I loath you for your lack of discipline
I cringe at the thought of you
I laugh because it amuses me that you think you are free


For years I wondered what you were all about
Curious if while looking into your eyes I would see myself
Now I am riddled with this hate.
Now I pray every night I am nothing like you.
Is this what they call fate?

Now my curiosity is dead.
Now my love for you is null
I m so happy mom took me and fled.

Your fabricated intoxicated world of miscalculated good intentions and repeated offenses against everyone and everything you come into contact with has bled into what is my world

You seeped through the walls my mother built and made me care.

You had no right! You had no idea. Now…you have no me.

Your probably don't even realize the damage you continue to cause.
You probably have grown accustom to hurting people.
But I ask you, Does it feel different this time? To hurt me…..your blood…
The only child left speaking to you.
Tel me, all of this because????

You claim when you look at me, when you hear me speak, when you hear about my past…you claim you can see yourself in me.
If that is the case…….
God help me, I'd rather die at my own hand than to repeat your predestined, self destructive, pitiful example of a human life.

Your voice was so cold
Your tone was so smug
I thought you might laugh at any moment

Fuck you for breaking your promises
Fuck you for hurting me
Fuck you for coming back

Fuck you

Fuck your excuses
Fuck your reasons
Fuck^your pain

I hope it hurts when you leave this world. I hope you find eternity unbearable.

I think eminem stole this from you and made millions......that faggot.

Ever read Hilary Mantel??? Think you'd like her novels

Good stuff, thanks for sharing

niice !!

Sat, read some more others cos they is roxxors!! hurry, go..

thank you to all who read this and enjoyed it...I m not that mean..really...:)

wow! you are very talented

Something tells me they'll read this at your trial.

I hope it hurts when you leave this world. I hope you find eternity unbearable.






That is cold

..also little smelly :D

Might be cold, but it is honest.

Pp I'd have sex with you for eternity if I could...

lol@ Pp...........naaa...I know its cold...but I would never hurt him.. I know God will take care of this for me....letting him live to a ripe old age and completely fucking miserable.
*clears throat** but I have forgiven him and I just can't forget.

Some things stay broke, Isolatedrain. Maybe sometime they might get better, maybe not.

n00b... quit being gay with me... you know I just can't quit you.

wheres iso dissapeared to?

You tease! Commenting on a 9 month old post to get my hopes up that our stormy poet was back.

rough.

very well written

Wow indeed. There's a mountain load of pent up anger in that there prose! Wonder what Griff would think?

Very powerful. I could feel the prose bristling with rage. Glad IR has moved on now. Otherwise that rage would eat her up.